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Thanks so much for explaining all that. I was getting really confused! Advanced critiques I definitely want to have a go at, although my slight concern is the copyright issue ...

It's kind of hard to 'hear' it without a tune, but the words are definitely strong and speak truthfully - there's definitely emotion there. Minor things I'd pick up on: ...

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Well, there are already about 5 reviews based on the storytelling side to this, so I might as well give you some feedback on the historical side. I think it's ...

A funny moral! Apart from a couple of grammatical errors and some spelling issues, I think my main comments would be: 1. The first paragraph - you have several hyphens ...

Hello, I'm fhwdf, I'm 13 (14 in 4 days!), I live in London and I am absolutely crazy about writing. Unfortunately, my friends aren't. I'm not that into internet forums ...