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This poem really rings true with me, as I myself truly hate doing things just because other people will like me for doing them, and I really get annoyed by ...

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I like it! There's not much to say that hasn't already been said, but I think it's a great idea and definitely worth following up. I would be interested to ...

You do write well, but the two things I would pick up on are a) your sentences, which are long and have too many clauses, and b) the amount of ...

Wow, great poem! It's got such lovely language and a sense of rhythm even though it doesn't really have a rhythm... If you know what I mean... and then it's ...

I thought I should at least post the first chapter, though I haven't decided yet if I want to post the whole thing. I wonder how you think it works ...

First off, amazing , you've managed to write a sonnet which rhymes and has the right number of syllables! We did them in English recently and I can tell you ...

Erm, the realised thing: not a mistake, I'm English. Realized is American. Listen and trees aren't supposed to rhyme, the rhyme scheme is ABCBDEFE. Speech falling into silence is a ...

This is a poem I wrote for a poetry competition, though I'm not sure if my teacher ever sent it in. Anyway, it popped into my head as I was ...

I agree with Prokaryote, the opening isn't as good as the rest. It needs something attention-grabbing. This sounds like a great story, though! I want to find out what happens. ...

Brilliant! I love this! Wow! Do forgive me, I'm a goth at heart. Yes, I think this is great and I can't wait to read more. I really love the ...

Wow! A very interesting style, I can see how you won. It's very difficult to pick up on it, but my main comments would be: maybe split it up into ...

Exactly the take my dad has on life! He's a bookseller but also a writer. Personally, I don't know what I'm going to do, but there'll definitely be novels, lots ...

I'm afraid I would have to disagree about the Jane Eyre/Wuthering Heights, although to say why would be to completely undermine my own philosophy: why should we have to like ...

I know this probably doesn't help, but here are my reasons for a couple of the things you've picked up on: first, you're right, but the one predominant characteristic of ...