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I liked this story - I could relate to your characters well, and I really felt sorry for Andre. I agree with most of the above points; though I do ...

I'm not going to do a huge review like last time, just mention a few things you could improve on. The grammar still needs a lot of work, though I ...

Xanthe "Are you like me, miss?" Xanthe stared at the people around her. She was terrified: they could see her. They could see her, and nobody was supposed to be ...

AquaMarine, it could be Xanthe that Rae bumps into. She's not actually physically in Seattle but it could be that other people with powers can see her when she's, er... ...

Xanthe walked home with her book in her hand, feeling the solid weight by her side as she went down the street. It was her third today, finishing the others ...

This is my attempt at a sonnet. Let me just clarify: this isn't about me or anything that's ever happened to me. More of... Well, paranoia of what might happen! ...

(Can I ask here? Agh, I need to start doing stuff instead of wondering whether I can) Billy, if you didn't read my previous post, just wondering if you'd mind ...

When you say people can be from anywhere, does that mean just America or anywhere in the world? I'll just find it easier to write an English person. I hope ...

I can't really tell much about it from this, but yes, if I picked up a book with that on the back (a blurb, by the way) I would read ...

Wow, no one's said platypus yet. And it's a proper noun, but the Dickens character Wackford Squeers.

Harriet. Hayley. I'm not sure why, but it seems like it should start with an 'H'. I'm not sure if I'm allowed to include the supernatural, but that's my character ...

I'm also planning on doing NaNo for the first time - all this advice is incredibly helpful! Oh no, I have to do the planning. I'm terrible at that.

Ooh, perfect thread for me. I'm resurrecting a writing club at my school which a couple of friends and I tried to do last year for Gifted and Talented (Gin ...

Great idea! I've been putting up a lot of my writing on a website which no one is ever going to look at and is purely for my own satisfaction, ...

OK, you're right, the punctuation isn't great, so I'm just going to do a massive grammar check for you. This is quite a big problem; I would suggest just going ...