fellowdankmemelord

Thanks! I'll keep your advice next time^^ And yes, it was done on purpose.

Thank you! It was at first an idea for a short story and this is also my first time doing a poem. If I had more time to do it, ...

Woah. I really like this poem. Good job, CandyWizard!

Hi there! I thought that the poem was really good. The way you describe makes me feel as if I was there. As the other reviewer said, the pausing was ...