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Re: Life's a game chapter 1 (Rough draft)
Hi Emily! I thought the beginning of it was great, the description and characters was on point. But, I am a little confused on the plot because of the quick ...
Jan 29, 2016 -
Re: Once More
Awww. This is a really cute poem. I love how melancholy this poem is. In my mind I imagined the story to be a woman writing letters to her lover. ...
Jan 28, 2016 -
Re: "I Would Kill Myself"
Hey Mad! I really like this poem. Good job! I'm surprised that this is your first poem. You really have talent. I agree with what TheShauzer said in his/her review. ...
Jan 28, 2016