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as the dawn comes to an end and i hold your face within my end i think about how i just want the world to end so that i could ...

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you always said that i would never be able to match you that i would never be able to catch your heart that you would always keep me at a ...

Everytime I see your face Lightning flashes and lights up your eyes revealing all that you wanted to keep secret Telling me all that you wanted me to hear yet ...

what about you makes me sweat and stumble turning me into such a nervous wreck what about you makes the mere mention of your name sent shivers down my back ...

her voice so serene her face elegant beyond mere words and yet she is so far away beyond my grasp or any mortal man's reach and yet she has the ...

i really liked it it was an interesting subject you talked about but to me you pulled it off just perfectly just perfectly hope you keep writing so that i ...

i just gotta say wow i want to know how you just got inspiration to write that poem it was just wow so different i liked it its a really ...

i liked where the beginning was going and the middle but at the end you took it into a direction i didn't like but hey its up to you i ...

i really liked it though your last line sorta didn't make too much sense i liked how it sounded all together hope you feel better and that no one else ...

i really liked this poem espeacially how you just string the order of your emotions together i really liked it and i think it shows real emotion which is what ...

wow maybe i don't have to worry about you becoming a gold digger wendy cause you do have some talent for a cuban lol just kidding your poem is really ...

your poem speaks to me it speaks of desire and pain and a deep sorrow it speaks of freedom and captivity its speaks your emotions and i believe that your ...

i liked your poem alot it shows great potential yet i can help but feel you were forcing some of the lines instead of writing from heart my advice is ...

this poem is actually really good it speaks of lots of emotions yet i still feel that its missing something make come alive make it your child your gift to ...