fearlessalways13

Prologue When I think of Italy, I picture Tuscan cobblestones sweeping through bustling streets, delicate violin music gracing the air. I can almost smell bread baking, tomatoes roasting, can almost ...

Hey there! Could you please check out my two short stories, "Three of Clubs" and "The Boy and His Moon"? Thank you so much!

This is probably one of the best first chapters I've read here on YWS! Though it's a bit on the short side, it's gripping and, overall, very good. However, there ...

Much thanks to both of you for your insight! Thank you also for taking the time to review this little story. (:

This is very good. I like the form of it being a letter, and the plot idea is awesome and fascinating. However, there were quite a few spelling/grammatical errors, particularly ...

Just a quick sidenote to all who will review this piece: Indenting did not work even when I copied and pasted from my document on the computer to YWS. So ...

Three of Clubs Around 5 o'clock every evening or so, an old man quietly flips the sign on the shop door to “Closed.” He gently takes our deck off the ...

Hey there! I'd love for you to check out my first attempt of a novel, "Into Thin Air", as well as my short story, "The Boy and His Moon". I ...

Wow. I have nothing bad to say! This is, hands-down, one of the best first chapters I've seen here on YWS, and maybe even one of the best by a ...

Thanks to both of you for your kind comments! I'll be sure to get a move on reviewing your work. (: IcyFlame, maybe you're right about my not being totally ...

Currently in progress, folks!

Hi! I'm finally getting around to commenting on chapter two of this wonderful story. (: Though I liked the length of the first chapter better, this was very good. I ...

Thank you all for your flattering comments! Chapter 2 will be up soon, promise. (: In the meantime, check out my short story, "The Boy and His Moon" if you'd ...

Hi there! This was an outstanding introduction to a novel I'm definitely putting on my list of must-reads. Seriously! Your character development was great, and I liked the way you ...

Chapter One I open the creaking door of the shack delicately, as if not to disturb what sits inside. I always enter this way, standing tip-toed in my satin shoes ...