fanatic_dadaism

I loved the ending of Grapes of Wrath, I mean most of the poeple i know said it ruined the book because of the cliched symbolism, but i felt the ...

I liked this, and i dont really like fanfic. but its a good story. Nice job I love the whole style and set up, and well you know about the ...

I acctually liked the first two stanza i think they help to set up the ending. Your wording seemed kind of shaky in places but i really dont see a ...

OKay second shot at a first impression....I gave up trying to fix the first poem i posted wasn't worth the trouble, yet after that u kinda fell into a hole ...

Acctually I'm really sorry about my response I was mad at the time so it came out really well sensitive and bad. Your very right about my style and the ...

Thank you for your comment your advice is truly noted. And may i add I'm not in anyway a novice to what your saying, I've been writing for a while ...

I disagree with the last comment or some of it at least, except like the rating and the capital "I". I think the way you wrote it with the dash-outs ...

I dont know, it needs work i think but i'm not sure what to do with it. :? I lay my head to rest sleeping can caress my sins away. ...

i agree with the above but it seems easy to work with, the wording just needs to be rearranged alittle. Ane possibly a little more emotion on your part. Not ...

I loved this, to be perfectly honest and not sound like i'm just like um how would you say....just saying good things to be nice? maybe. but i really do ...

I agree with most of the above, and I think it has a okay sense of emotion but a different wording or more description of the girl might add more ...

hi well I'm Elizabeth i'm turning 18 next month :D and well i've ben writing for a while, but i can not spell what so ever that is why spell ...