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  • Dramatic Poetry Re: my love

    When everything starts to fall apart And everything is going dark I know that you will always be there and nothing can go wrong We might fight but we will ...

    Oct 5, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The murderous suicide

    depressing and creepy, but really good. though butterflies FADE; and where did they come from? more details; dont stray from the subjest

    Sep 25, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I never told you I loved you

    "Me? Fall?" I laugh "its not possible," The 'i' in 'it's' should be capatillized. I see him frown, worry in his eyes I feel uneasy when i see that A ...

    Sep 25, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Love

    LOVE

    Sep 25, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: ConquesT

    like poison i slowly engulf you, your urge to resist is now gone, addicted to me you are, mesmerized you shall stay, you are my conquest, perhaps you’re more? time ...

    Sep 25, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: In love with you.

    i loved this poem, but the rhyming scheme was off. some lines flowed and were long while others were short but other than that, great job!

    Aug 31, 2008
  • Other Poetry Re: my fair william

    face always covered, by the hair, alone and hurting, too many problems, im there, forever will be, ill love you always, know that, rarely outspoken, random and kind, a spot ...

    Aug 16, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: For Will

    that was beautiful. i love how it ends. suspensful. short. it was perfect. i loved the friendship blossoming into a relationship. may you two have enternal happiness. :) best poem. ...

    Aug 16, 2008
  • Information Desk Archive Re: What is Dramatic Poetry?

    so true

    Aug 16, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: A Place Called Freedom

    :)

    Aug 16, 2008
  • Narrative Poetry Re: you kill me

    while on top of a building, i close my eyes and with poise and grace, i take my leap i float beautifully as you just watch softly, yet rapidly, i ...

    Aug 16, 2008
  • Lyric Poetry Re: sacrifice

    close your eyes, hold your breath, count the seconds, until my death pull the plug, push shutdown, ill leave tonight, without a frown ill give myself up, for you, my ...

    Aug 16, 2008


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