faith

how can you love someone who yields so easily to the crush of your body pushing her backwards, posing her into seductive shapes on your dirty sheets. who submitted, so ...

*drools* ooh vampires... This reminds me a lot of an Ann Rice novel. Same ornate, formal language and faint dry wit in places. not terribly original, but well written.

I liked this- it had good attention to detail, but not so much that is bogged down the story. just the little things like mozzerella sticks scattered across the living ...

i agree- this was very good. strong ending. i know a good place you could submit it: they dont take a lot of submissions, not all that are submitted get ...

you did a good job replicating the style and 'voice' of the Thoroughbred series. heh with a little work you could be a ghostwriter for it hehe. anyway, you need ...

this is really clever and original, good work.

its not new, but i rented Donnie Darko the other day- it was really brilliant. Think a giant talking sinister rabbit (harvey on speed) who foretells the end of the ...

hmm...i still like evanescence and linkin park, but i do agree that their songs all sound the same after a while. the evanescence chick has a fantastic voice on her ...

hi Dreami its Chaos from equination- welcome to the club :)

hi...I just joined recently myself, but i'm already minorly addicted. you're Chevy Chevelle from TYWC right? and I'm Faith, obviously. anyway, welcome. 8)

I agree that its a bit cliche- one thing I suggest is to try freestyle- don't rhyme 'deep', emotional poems like this, because they often come off sounding like sappy ...

I didn't like this as well as 'the day America will fall'. It was a little less complex, didn't have as much impact. It seemed that unlike your other poem, ...

you are developing a very nice sense of cynicism. This is a great political poem, showing that human nature makes it impossible for us to coexist peacefully for any length ...

i could have sworn i commented on this already but i guess not :? it borders on the 'mushy icky romantic' type of poem that makes me cringe but is ...

At first I was half asleep and thought this was an attempt at a serious poem that went horribly wrong and was about to say something scathing, then I realized ...