faith

you paint a vivid picture of infatuation. not terribly original but some elegant writing in there, some nice lines: Angel eyes rub the salt into my weeping wounds

But Brad, the examples of homosexual culture which you illustrated above are not the norm, but merely the aberrations which can be found within any subset of a population. Ok, ...

i like the first line, like you're responding to a comment we can't hear. 'but' is one of my favorite ways to start a poem, actually, along with 'and'. probably ...

some parts of this are really beautiful, in a simple way Never again, never again, Will I succumb to the back of your hand, Forever bruised, Scars you will never ...

hmm, pretty good but the last line sounds kind of like one of those PA ads on TV like, 'dont become another statistic- don't drink and drive' hahaha

i know what Nate looks like, because he had a picture in his profile on TYWC, muahaha.

oh also, im sorry i havent been around much, i have another job too, and school, and a horse, and im trying to write my own novel...

excuse my poor typing, i accidentally sliced open my finger on a razor blade so, yeah... anyway, i just got offered $1500 to write 6 1-2 page little stories for ...

it happened to me too, i would guess its the server.

the first line wasn't anything special in my opinion, but i rather life the image of 'black overpowering love', because its in contrast to our normal views of love as ...

pretty, but it rambled a bit, and what's a salad day? careful not to get too obscure with your metaphors, otherwise they just confuse the reader and break the spell ...

I'm now 18 so once i actually have the money i might get a tattoo of a rose vine with thorns wrapped around my upper arm. maybe a horse running ...

I've done both but I prefer English...of course one of my horses is an off the track thoroughbred, and its kind of hard to ride one of those western, ehe.

you warned in the title that it wasn't suitable for small children, so its fine to stay here in my opinion.

1. CSI 2. Without A Trace 3. House 4. the Simpsons 5. CSI: NewYork 6: CSI: Miami 7. Cold Case 8. Law and Order 9. Lost 10. er i cant ...