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yeah, it got an 'A' ... but the teacher said the ammount of beer bottles was unrealistic. I don't know though, it would take a lot of beer to kill ...

The descriptions at the beginning were pretty and not overdone but the small ammount of dialogue there was sounded stiff. "I'm glad you are awake Rachel" people usually use contractions ...

Wait a minute. Tessitore, you drink blood?! its a tasty low-carb beverage everyone can enjoy.

I agree that society places too much emphasis on thinness as beauty, but don't forget that some people -are- naturally that thin and don't starve themselves to be that way, ...

lets see how many apply to me... *counts on fingers, runs out of fingers.* actually, everything except the actual dressing like a goth and thinking I'm a goth and wanting ...

hmmm... the strong rhyme scheme emphasizes the sort of drugrush feel to the poem... it was less annoying than most rhyming poetry but I can't say as I liked it. ...

and you go well with a fruity Chardonnay.

An example of a good poem. Nothing too fancy, just poignant and well-executed. Good use of repetition, and the ending sort of lingers in your mind after the poem is ...

I like reminds me of a Neil Gaiman novel. The personification of death, that is. One suggestion- expand the last sentence, 'tommorows are hung.' Its just the coolest image... since ...

i wrote this, for all things, as a short fiction piece (500 words or less) for my creative writing class where the excercise was to write about someone of a ...

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soy, that higebra picture is really awesome.

awww, we'll miss you. :( ..and yeah, if you're on the computer at school for something, come here instead! hehe

I am INTJ, or Mastermind: - moderately expressed introvert - moderately expressed intuitive personality - moderately expressed thinking personality - slightly expressed judging personality "INTJs are

*narrows eyes* are you calling me a cam whore? hawk- no, I'm not in pony club but I show hunters and jumpers (or i used to, my horse got injured ...