fading-dream

I thought this had potential but never went anywhere. The person gets into a cab, goes to some random place, and then goes to their hotel. I didn't see the ...

It thought this was very well written, though a tad short. The main problem is that you start talking about a woman, and then the world ends. There's really no ...

Definitely presents a very interesting concept. I'm really interested in how nightmares play into this. I do however, have one small complaint; for some reason, I can't stand present tense ...

I agree with everyone above me. To me, it almost seemed more like a list of actions taken than an actual story. There was no emotion written into the story, ...

Okay, first a few nitpicks. The fourth "Stanza" (there are no breaks, so they are also like sentences) has four lines while the rest remain with three. Secondly, the grass, ...

Hello. So, I thought this poem was alright, but needs a bit of work. First off, the third and fourth stanza don't follow the same rhythm as the other ones. ...

I hope the whole novel isn't like this. I know my review was the harshest thing I have ever written, but I was very appalled. Maybe I saw it wrong, ...

All I have to say is "WOW". That is perhaps the best short story I have ever read. At first, I thought it looked lengthy and was sure I would ...

At first, I was very judgmental about how short this poem was, but in the end, I was convinced this worked well for you. At first I thought this was ...

I absolutely hated this. I'm sorry, the dialog is absolutely terrible. Plus, I think the whole child molestation thing is completely inappropriate, no matter what age you are. I also ...

That was really intense. I loved every bit of it, though I don't get why she didn't lock the bathroom door. Also, maybe because of where I live, I am ...

Thank you so much for the review Imaginative Insanity. I agree with you on everything and have changed it. I also added a new paragraph that describes the character a ...

The best storylines lie in final fantasy games and other rpgs. Final Fantasy X had a particularly good one. But, the best storyline ever is in Tales of the Abyss. ...

The others have pointed out most of the grammatical nit-picks I had with this story. So, I will just be reviewing the story as a whole. The first paragraph intrigued ...

Binding Darkness 1 The wind howled loudly through the silhouette trees. Through the midnight fog, I peered deep into the forest, searching, praying that I would not find anything. My ...