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I really like the concept of this piece. I just think you should try to show, not tell, a bit more often. Example: The General proceeded to the front lines. ...

Cheers! I'm here as asked =) I haven't noticed any bad grammar mistakes and I had no trouble following the flow of text, that's a + for you. I'll agree ...

I actually live in the Philadelphia area and heard about this. The webcams were just supposed to take pictures every few hours so the school could keep track of the ...

Brokencyde and Miley Cyrus are pretty annoying.

Reading is awesome. :smt023 Hehe, Vasticty. :smt042 Nice hair, f1shes. :smt061 Gracias. :elephant:

I think the stanzas in this piece have a lot of meaning to them, but I'd like the poem much more if the structure of each stanza varied more. It ...

Most recent picture. :?

I love The Cure, Cat Power, Architecture in Helsinki, The Kills, Coconut Records, Surfer Blood, Cold War Kids, The White Stripes, The Action Design, The Greenhornes, Fruit Bats and Espers.

I really like this. I'm a big fan of creepy stories. You are magnificent with descriptions, the image of the room was so vivid. Even with the descriptions, there is ...

This is a powerful piece, I'm not sure it should be in the non-fiction section though. You have descriptions in here with a lot of admirable depth. Her footsteps were ...

Will you review my flash fiction story, please?

Will you review my flash fiction story, please? Pleasies.

10/10 because I love wolves. :smt047

You create a lot of emotion with this piece. It makes prayer seem almost romantic. A tugging, all around my torso, like gloriously burning ropes were wound around me. I ...

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