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Wow this poem was in fact creepy and a bit depressing . I think that this could have been just a bit more descriptive and use a stricter syntax. But ...

I think think this poem was so funny. Like a poem about a nerd wanting to ending his cyber relationship and this the only way he know how to dump ...

I like this poem a lot how descriptive it is and the syntax of it all

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I love where you going but to know a hero you must look at the villian. And the villian isn't so clear to me.

A poem that lists all her good points is a good way to go!

Hey you join a day earlier than me! Cool!

This poem hit me with emotion but that emotion was apathy . I think if you use stronger words you can place the burden of your lost friend on your ...

Is this the the musings of a fellow band geek ? I play Alto sax. I like your poem and how vague it is. But I fear it is too ...

This piece seems unfinished I feel there is more to the story but it is not here. The last time I checked Hera was wicked to her husband's mistresses and ...

In this poem I felt that everything is forced. The rhyming , the story, and the emotion all forced. I feel that you started off with a good idea but ...

I see a lot of pain in this poem. The speaker has been rejected and is trying to pass through life without confronting his problem. I see all this hurt ...