ewolf20

4 characters, two plots, and no matter what i hate how i paced it. I'm struggled with several plot points like that mirror doppleganger plot and the characters believing the ...

now not all alien or fantasy races based on insects act like this, it just seems like a very common trope that i got sick of it. at some point, ...

if you didn't know it was a thing, allow me to refresh your memory. awhile back, i posted a story about a boy who found out about his destiny as ...

someone had compared a story i pitched to the dragonriders of pern at some point, mainly the point out the similarities despite a few differences here and there. really it ...

hey y'all. it's me ewolf20 or fruity now that i moved past my wolfaboo phase. i kinda stopped going to this site some time ago after i found greener pastures ...

as a break from all that, I wanted to start maybe doing a short series of stories detailing a woman observing the by-product of an eldritch abomination and a human ...

When two characters get together, they must have chemistry. This is very important when you trying to write a decent romance story between two characters. It's not without its challenges, ...

So we all know the usual tinkerbell stereotype right? How about taking fairies back to there roots while adding a nice insect themed touch to it. Basically bug people, pretty ...

this is supposed to be clean so no curse words. it might come off as stilted but I really feel like I just don't want to do it.

Thank you all, the support was great.

so i'm screwed.

the sad thing is, i can't remember like at all, and i can't visit my old school because laws and stuff. and i went to a middle school where a ...

another example: JOHN And that's how I got detention John sits on a table with Wilbur and ANDRE, a kid about their age. Wilbur gorges on a sandwich. WILBUR (mouth ...

example: JOHN At least you're not treating me like I'm sub human. LIZZIE Even after what happen? C'mon, Jo. I wouldn't treat ya like that. BOY (O.S.) Bummer! Never forget ...

so, someone critiqued that my characters sounded like 1950s dads....kid you not. now i'm wondering how exactly can i write a middle school character that sounds like a middle schooler? ...