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Re: A Pokemon Love Story
Bagon is gen 3 >.< always forget that. but yeah I like gen 3 but that's about the last gen I like. They got repetitive after that.
Sep 15, 2013 -
Re: A Pokemon Love Story
I know Bagon's can't be found that way haha. I've played all the games, but I prefer Gen 1, hence how prominent Gen 1 is in this poem. I like ...
Sep 15, 2013 -
Re: Nightmare-Prologue
I agree with you, but the author seems to have a problem with being told her work is not good.
Aug 23, 2013 -
Re: If My Breath Stops
I feel like you dislike me because of my review on your own piece of work. If you have a problem with me then please PM me as I do ...
Aug 23, 2013 -
Re: If My Breath Stops
Thank you for the critique :) I will change that line, I see what you mean about it. On the subject of imagery: this poem is supposed to be simplistic. ...
Aug 23, 2013 -
Re: If My Breath Stops
The bold is not my fault. This site will not let me get rid of it. I personally think that the punctuation is fine. It is supposed to have pauses. ...
Aug 23, 2013 -
Re: If My Breath Stops
What is that supposed to mean?
Aug 23, 2013 -
Re: Sonnet 1 ( My Only Love)
You don't have to XD And it's ok :)
Aug 23, 2013 -
Re: Sonnet 1 ( My Only Love)
OK.... the site wouldn't let me do the spacing thing. I will link you to a poem of mine where i use it.
Aug 23, 2013 -
Re: Sonnet 1 ( My Only Love)
What I do is separate the stanzas in this way jaeghfldiufhfekhef efdsjfksldgfjiofsgjfkldgj jkahfkjghsrkgjk hfifh;rlkgjrsdklvk Sorry for the gobbledygook. Or other people have said that when about to s
Aug 23, 2013 -
Re: A Pokemon Love Story
It's actually a poem for my Pokemon-obsessed boyfriend. Hence the 'drug' reference. I tried to bring in the potion and heal items but it was a bit too hard ^.^
Aug 15, 2013 -
Re: A Pokemon Love Story
Just looked her up, heard of her, but that wasn't a reference to her song XD I put it as I didn't know what else to rhyme bugs with.
Aug 12, 2013 -
Re: A Pokemon Love Story
I don't now who kesha is 0.0
Aug 12, 2013 -
Re: ----
It was coming from a sarcastic persepective XD I'm not one for Bible-talk so I'd rather not have the discussion. I don't believe in the Christian God/Idea of Satan so ...
Aug 12, 2013 -
Re: A Pokemon Love Story
Thanks XD
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