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This is my first short story, guys. Please be nice! jk jk I might make it into a novel one day. :) Young Dakarai was an African-American slave, only seventeen. ...

I actually really liked this poem, contrary to what others might say. Sure, some words could have been replaced by others, but this is your interpretation, no? It's quite simple, ...

Haha, I just came across this. This is real cute! I love it! :) November 14 is my little sister's birthday! What a coincidence...two very wonderful things on this day ...

Wow. This poem was so beautiful. The words were very descriptive; I could see what was happening in the poem in my head( like a mental video!) There were a ...

I love this poem! It is really good! I went to Catholic school for about 7 years and it was the worst experience of my life. I am Atheist and ...

Please Comment Guys! :) I just started writing in sixth grade, so...I need all the criticism I can get...please? :) :D :smt006

The skies were a ghastly scarlet, the trees a sallow waste. Across the square ran a King's varlet Running--Hiding-- Avoiding the merciless guillotine, His mind was greatly chiding. An apprentice ...

Thank you very much for your criticism. This was one of my first poems, and I've been actually wanting to make it longer for a little while. I wrote it ...

Fear, a horrible thing. Just the feeling of it stings. Haunting thoughts linger, Attempts to forget are hindered.