evelynelectra

Glad you liked it, the serial killer theme was given by our teacher so I couldn't get out of that cliche. Yeah I thought there may be some tense issues ...

Thank you, I will take your advice into account and make it more descriptive with he killings and sort out the rushed parts and make the age of the killer ...

Thank you for the advice :) yeah I always have trouble with tenses in writing, it's something I've never quite grasped perfectly. Yeah I tried to add a hint of ...

I loved this, it engaged me from the start. I'd love to read the next part :D

Thanks :) yeah I had to warn people, it was written after watching loads of interviews with serial killers so I could capture the reality of it.