ethanswish

I still see you on your bed of roses, stems flowing from your hands. Petals blossoming in pulses like waves washing over sand. I still smell your metallic sorrow, the ...

I'm glad you did. Powerful. It makes my skull numb with all of the repetetive happy go lucky poems that I see everywhere, with what seems like it's been given ...

I love your messages. Sweeter than your tea. I like how you ask if I'll be out, although I always am. I like how you'll come find me. I like ...

wow. epic. My hairs were standing on end throughout every verse, I hung onto every word. It reminds me a little bit of the system of a down song lost ...

Perfect. Spur of the moment and turn of the century, The wheels grind on and the shit, it churns out. Everyone, cheer in the New Year, Let’s make all the ...

Perfect. Spur of the moment and turn of the century, The wheels grind on and the shit, it churns out. Everyone, cheer in the New Year, Let’s make all the ...

hahaa, this made me smile :] well fucking done! ^^ the f word is powerful, but you can't abuse it and you haven't. It conveys emotion more than most other ...

A lot of shuffling later and something I like! I agree on the haunting tone, it's dark but in the oh so right way. The way you've written it as ...

The rythm and pace of this piece is great :D it's dramatic and capturing, and just flows of your tongue, it's really beautiful :] very powerful indeed! You've really captured ...

I. I have done all those things you want to do. Fucked all the pretty girls you want to. Got high with the guys you want to. Been beaten by ...

thankk you :] yeahh, I wanted to keep it simple, un romantacize it as it's a un romantic situation ^^ make it more real, more like something a normal person ...

:] wowww!! I've been looking through and couldn't find anything I could relate to enough to review but this actually distracted me from predator! I love the way you've written ...

I like being able to see old pictures of you and be glad you were prettier when I knew you, being able to walk past girls wearing your perfume and ...

Wet red eyes and a self conscious look away, a glittering glimpse into the dark side she harbours behind those lids. Shaken. Stitched. Sore and sewn shut. Sheepishly she breaks ...

awh thank you :] yeah, I'll sort out the structure, I didn't realize how cramped it looked >< actually before I posted it I was debating which catagory it should ...