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I know I probably shouldn't comment since I'm part of the contest too, but there is one thing I absolutely MUST say or i'll simply die of not letting you ...

Hello :3 This is awesome. I love your whole idea. The idea of sacrifice? Perfect. Light touch of gore? Got it. It's well written and easy to read. There is ...

Contest entry: 150 Words FOR SALE! Rare Indian Krait; cheap. That is what it said at the top of the page. I’d made myself my usual Americano, one sugar, no ...

I liked it. The way you percieve the freedom by comparing it to a stallion is awesome. I also love the repetition you use throughout, especially emphasizing on the word ...

WOW. Never had I expected this much response. I honestly cannot say how surprised I am at everyone's reviews. Not to mention positive comments! So first of all, thank you. ...

Thank you EscapeThat, i'm glad at least someone's understood my reasons behind this piece. That was the exact impression I initially meant to put across. No further thought; yet being ...

Gosh, you make me blush. But thank you. A hell of a lot. As pretty as it may sound, that poem was gruesome to write. Now an explanation that I ...

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! :D And thank you for pointing out the little bit of imperfection. I must admit, i really didn't notice it! Hehe. Respectfully yours, ...

I felt like writing something structured and fun, so voila! Here it is :D This is a Shakesperean Sonnet. (The form being abab cdcd efef gg + 10 syllables per ...

Thank you for all the lovely responses! I understand if this is indeed a hard piece to review in deep, thus the short but sweet comments the majority of you ...

The best book I have ever read would have to be Evergreen , by Belva Plain, hands down. It simply affected the way i saw a lot of things, and ...

This was written for an old English assignment. It never got marked, which I was quite upset over, therefore would appreciate some response. I'm not even sure if it makes ...

Woah, you are absoulutely right! I wasn't focusing on my narrative, the character's latest and most present thoughts made themselves comfortable and gradually began changing in tense. Hmph. Not all ...

A short thud filled across the radiated room. It was warm; stuffy to a point where I was conscious of the discomfort of it all. I needed a crane to ...

I know i probably shouldn't say anything since i'm part of the contest too - but you would knock me out dead in a "Descriptive Hardcore" match any day you ...