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The idea behind haikus is that you must show and not tell in 17 syllables, a daunting task and one i dont try to take on. In this poem you ...

First off i commend you for fighting off writers block, its a terrible disease that haunts far to many carpal tunnels, next off i wouldn't put somtehing into a public ...

This poem sounds like something strait out of the sunset tree by the mountain goats. That being said, well done. Its modern and accessible without being childish in the least, ...

Definitely hit up the wallace stevens 13 ways of looking at blackbirds. And thank you for the kind review. The idea for the poem is that each stanza could stand ...

thanks man

I sit on the grassy Golgotha thinking of the red ant Watching her graze me with her shapely jaw I suspect daylight treachery, the way she searches my elbow. panic ...

Allen Ginsberg, Wallace Stevens, William Carlos Williams, John Berryman, Charles Bukowski, Walt Whitman, Frost, Langston Hughes, JO

Muse, our teacups are broken. Did you have to push the shelf over? im sure this has personal meaning but i thought the slight change in tone was a good ...

Halt! im not being unintelligible for naught, and there are metaphors. Beat is not in tea shades Not in peasant wanderings Or the singular glare of a Jugular attachment Or ...

this is a good poem, though i think this belongs in lyric poetry. anyhoo, i cant crtisize the point of the poem, its a good universal idea and there aint ...

are agree with carelessaussie. You have some stunning visuals and great lines, i feel a few of the rhymes were forced and in the age of free verse you can ...

We did a school assignment this year on Wallace Stevens. This is some of the collateral 1 What Monstrous arms! Streaming to heaven Fire Dancing with Shivan urgencies. 2 You, ...

Thankee very kindly, all of your criticism is grokked and will be implemented soon.

A good buddy of mine works with special ed kids, and he has generally the same message.

CAW! I don't know, I like the meter and syntax of natural thought and breath. That is to me what free verse is, an exercise in baring your nervous system ...