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First, arent all prayers poems, kinda. Second, check out the psalms if you want some religious poetry Third, it is impossible to really review such and atavistic poem without hurting ...

A cough fishing up the last tar in my lungs I remember a friend who asked me once The lion is a marxist, so send him to jail? The Lion ...

Good lord, finally some real poetry. Nothing is in this poems is too obvious but nothing is caught in atavistic obscurity or, even worse, abstract obscurity. Not much to criticize, ...

thanks for the review

A Soldier at rest surrounded by poppies the sun total in his eyes playing with the sand wound around his hand Blinks away the dust hears people singing some false ...

that was extremely skillful. i loved it. not to much else to say, keep it right up.

first off, jobs suck. second off, there are few grammatical errors that im not going to point out and correct because im sure some more anal member will take care ...

8 ways of looking at trees other poetry a heads up, this is thought out. Try and count the references! by the way thanks for the last critique, it certainly ...

A solid effort but like so many poems it only tells you things, a poem loses most of its power when it tells you what to see instead of allowing ...

This was a fantastic reawakening of sylvia plath. I noticed your name and i can really see her influence in you, and when i say influenced i dont mean plagiarized. ...

Death will always strike the important matter is, is your soul saved yet? Saying is is just doesn't create any sort of cohesiveness . In a haiku you are supposed ...

Interesting, i cant bring my thoughts on the subject matter to bare except to say that you have chosen a timeless topic and did a commendable job on it. Now ...

Bah too cute for my liking. It sounds like a hallmark card. I hate to be a downer but i see nothing but adorable puppies and gum drops in this ...

And to that place where the sharp Athenian law cannot touch us Watching our lion manes starve, savage, naked to the flame, too many egg shells rushing to the pavement; ...

Good theme, solid writing but this seemed to me to be much more like prose broken up into small poetic sounding lines. If you just put them in sentences you ...