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All i wanted to say has been said above this post, but I would like to say a few words of encouragement. Of sorts. You are 15 so that excuses ...

This poem is written with a weight that is rare even in dramatic poetry. I am not sure, but if my instincts are correct this is a love poem of ...

I am humbled by these reviews.

I do not deserve that high praise my friend.

Figures crowed my tear swollen eyes. Everyone in my life whom I've loved; all the enemies that I still despise. I wish that people would stop crying so much in ...

Don't listen to the swine above, keep the format. This is a great blend of Prose writing and pure poetic journalism. It's great and keep it that way.

God no, not more moralizing. My mind grows weary under the pressure of the constant preaching of morality that i get from all sides day to day. Now it has ...

Its always a fantastic thing to read a well written story, its a talent. A talent which few have I might add. While the angst is so dense that it ...

Prose at its best my friend. A testament to the zeitgeist of any story worth telling. A scorching sensational piece, but i feel as though its just the beginning to ...

Well, my friend, the part with the rope was a rather weak allegory i thought of when i tried to describe our human agricultural society. There is only technically togetherness ...

Gorgeous words right there. I usually don't like rhyming poems, because of my own horrid prejudices, but this one was very good. I personally don't get much out of it ...

Why? I don't fully see the purpose of this piece. I understand the angst and anger and all that, but surely there are more artful ways to put it, maybe ...

this cheered me up in a way that poetry rarely does. This piece is lighthearted without being airy. Now i dont know if it was a joke, i laughed, but ...

thanks for the reviews everyone

Thankee kindly