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Re: so you want to be a writer?
Its really simple guys, if you don't have an almost violent urge to write don't do it. If thats too much to handle, don't write. I know its hard to ...
Oct 5, 2009 -
Re: so you want to be a writer?
I do believe that the advice given in the poem is some of the best I have ever heard for a young writer. We don't need bull, we don't need ...
Sep 24, 2009 -
Re: so you want to be a writer?
Chin up Chicken s****. Mod edit: No swearing outside of literary works.
Aug 10, 2009 -
Re: Revenge
Emoticons should never, unless under threat of death, be allowed in a poem. Now I am a victim of writing something in one mad go and then smiling like I ...
Mar 5, 2009 -
Re: Small and friendly tip
To encourage my heart following I like to smoke a good hunk of maroon, followed by shots, vandalism and if possible wild coitus. When the last echo of this dies ...
Mar 5, 2009 -
Re: Pleading to a Wet Sun
In time where we have billboards for love and Japanese cars It ain't uncommon for the streetlight to call themselves stars Where the more you learn the more you can ...
Mar 5, 2009 -
Re: καλοκαίρι
Thank you kindly for the reviews. It may help to realize that καλοκαίρι is Greek for summer.
Nov 29, 2008 -
Re: At Last
I suppose its easier to understand if you have played the sport.
Nov 16, 2008 -
Re: A soilders life
Ill tell you this, come up with some original thought and please learn how to use the english language correctly. You is not u. I don't detect the craft that ...
Nov 14, 2008 -
Re: How do you write poetry?
"I hate to advocate drugs, alcohol, or insanity to anyone but they've always worked for me."-HST Good Luck
Nov 14, 2008 -
Re: The Forgotten Begotten (Your Take on the Human Paradox)
Im writing this on a failing computer with only a few minutes left on her last battery, so excuse and brevity and/or grammatical errors. This is a beautiful poem, One ...
Nov 14, 2008 -
Re: Hold Me!
This is banal in the worst possible way. I can't keep saying this to every poem on this website but people need to stop talking about their old boyfriends and ...
Nov 14, 2008 -
Re: The Birds
Well, its brevity is its strength. It could be long and awful or short and sweet. Unlike maybe every other thirteen year old here your message comes on strong and ...
Nov 14, 2008 -
Re: pain
Pain, you can run all you want but in the end its still there the pain inside of you you wishing for it to dissapear but its still there no ...
Nov 14, 2008 -
Re: mistakes
This belongs to some horrible facebook note to all of your friends. There are thousands of them, all saying the same meaningless thing. "You are the all-seeing all-dancing crap of ...
Nov 13, 2008
