erratik_statik

I'm set for the rules.. And ok now i'll do this better.... Basically, I signed up to this thing because I never get a chance to share anything I write, ...

firstly this poem is beautiful, the metaphors are strikingly original but the imagery remains clear. The flow is good too: a few flaws that come almost inevitably when u write ...

Concrete Apocalypse Do you remember when the birds they used to serenade the sunrise as it danced over the hills that echoed life in all directions? And the flowers swayed ...

I'm Brendan I'm Australian, 15 and very bored. I like writing. Which could be why I'm here... :-) P.S I think I'm more interesting than this post would make you ...

CALL ME SUICIDAL So here I stand, right here I stand Stagnant in the raining sand A hollow shell without a home A stranger to familiar land Where so many ...

you don't need punctuation... I can't believe the people criticising you for not having it :@