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250 points to whoever can figure out where June hides her halo :-) Like, I've done nothing for anybody on here yet... and she still puts me on a list. ...

Welcome to YWS mate, First of all... I loved the poem. I like your style, its so precise with the imagery :-) Nothing much really constructive to say, I loved ...

I loved it, and your right: it is very prufrock-esque... (lovesong is possibly my favourite poem :-) Wonderful imagery, and even the way it is written adds to the idea ...

Sydney is third, but no melbourne? Hmm You take this round New South Wales! grrr

Haii I read the first two stanzas before I noticed what was going on... (I had no idea what a sestina is) so that is impressive in itself.. to carry ...

A kamikaze of pointlessness. Leaden words pervade the air and perforate the silence, an earthquake in a bubble, flirtatious locusts. A silent black on which to paint the most accurate ...

woo. June is a freak :-) :-)

This wasn't sex. This wasn't love. This sure as hell wasn't romantic. And why was there a vampire?? You didn't make it sound like a vampire.. it was like you ...

You've met? Should introduce me one day lol No, don't. The poem was pretty good... it got your message across and I have no real picks or anything. But I ...

hahahha I swear I'm no necrophiliac. - or a rapist for that matter. this is just bitterness, innocent bitterness - that is all. It was not meant for an audience, ...

Sweat glistens on your porcelain crystallising in the chill, you are the ice queen, and you looked better in the darkness - you tasted better in the darkness that your ...

don't misconstrue.... I wouldn't want to meet you in a dark alley.....

Shini: Love your hair in the 1st... are the red bits extensions? I'm thinking about dying my hair black actually.... hmmm Barret: I literally laughed out loud: possibly the sickest ...

Nominative is the pronoun as the subject of the sentence: the pronoun doing the action HE ran It ran I ran ER lauft ES lauft ICH laufe Accusative is the ...

Isn't it different with different people? Like if a guy has a sick shirt and cool hair you'll notice it, or if a girl has a good body or pretty ...