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and here I was thinking this place had gone to the dogs.

You're looking for a wife in chernobyl; it's shot to hell.

I find it lovely that people now write poetry tributes to teen fiction. The positive thing is that your poem is probably on par if not better than the whole ...

The difference between good poetry and cathartic poetry is that in order to write good poetry you need to write in order to make OTHER people feel something. We as ...

Hey kids Umm I've sort of discovered that I'm not really a huge fan of any of the so called 'classic' poets (dickinson, poe, blake etc). And this distaste for ...

haha I go to that site heaps to June. Poetry is basically using WORDS to create IMAGES in peoples minds and each subsequent image tells a story or an idea. ...

drifting, drifting through time like an ocean of chain links sea monkeys laughing spinning off axes stone irises, blind firing fragments, shooting stars watching and revolving burning burning burning

Something mischievous brews, beneath the skin of that black balloon With a thousand golden irises that wink at us so innocently, before they are swallowed by a thousand mouths, foaming ...

I wouldn't call this a poem, more an advertiesment. But in keeping with that, it is a simple, accessible method of getting a simple, accessible message across to a simple, ...

Everything is black. Torn apart between the seams and broken beyond the recognition of a mother’s eye, a heart beating neurotically stable like techno music, and alone. Silence roars like ...

I loved the chaos in this. It was just raw thoughts, flashing in and out of the background in random places until some nightmarishly psychedelic images appeared and suddenly there's ...

I pick you up at midnight, manicured grass sleeps beneath our feet as we trip over each other, stifling euphoria with cupped palms. “ What to do tonight babe? What ...

Hai. Not a constructive review as such, because as you said, I don't want to wreck your coffee :-), but I just wanna say that I enjoyed and appreciate this. ...

get loose and waste it on actions, not material things :-) throw a party or something, go on a holiday. material things lose value, memories don't :-)

We can pass for undersized cynics in pants but naked, oh, naked we are such children I can't meet your eyes. (I think you could use a break after children: ...