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Re: HAWK NELSON
Oh my god hawk nelson is so freakin awesome its in my top five fave.
Feb 11, 2007 -
Re: The Shadow (chapeter 1 Will)
It was ok but it needs lots more work.you need to do a spell check and it seems a little dry if you could pump it up and prolong the ...
Feb 11, 2007 -
Re: Pick The Background!
yeah it would be really cool if you could have the backgroung to maybe relate to what is maybe going on in that month. just a sugestion :)
Feb 8, 2007 -
Re: Ice Castle
I like how it is nice and up beat but you could probably make it a little bit longer. but so far i really liked it
Feb 8, 2007 -
Re: give me a shot
Hey this was really great. But if you could maybe pump it up some it would be better. i like the way you describe your feeling. but it was good ...
Feb 8, 2007
