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yeah this was actually very good I really liked this and I did not see anything wrong with it.

hey this was pretty good but you had a few cap. errors like you needed to be You cause its at the begining of the line. but other than that ...

yes I agree with them this really did seem like a list. also you had way to many Mr. Rights and He Woulds. so yeah you should read up on ...

hey this was really great and I really want to know what happens next. “Be thankful he can’t, he’d kill you for been here.” maybe you could say he'd kill ...

I vote for the dragon :lol: cause there so much cooler. oh yeah yep yep yep lol

"Gosh does this woman ever shut up." Jeff thought as his new guidance counselor drug on and on. She had on a gray pant suit with a white shirt, all ...

hey this was very good i did not want this to end. you were able to keep me hooked from beginning to end so keep it up. And i could ...

hey this was good and i agree with Claudette but anyways it was good and I could not find anything else wrong with it. so keep it up. :D

When AJ could no longer hear the music and all of the noise she stopped to look around her. To really see the area she was always in but there ...

hey yeah this is another repost but this one is on chapter 1 it is improved from the last one. "AJ hurry up and get in the car." Amber shouts ...

hey this is just a repost of it i just fixed the errors could not find anything else wrong with it. My life is like an ocean; at the peak ...

Yes, I like this a lot I really could not find anything wrong with it. It has a great flow to it and it is pumped up so great job.

"A.J hurry up and get in the car! We are going to get caught." Amber shouts from inside the car. "Soooo who cares I'm having tons of fun" A.J slurs ...

hey its not much but i want to know what you think. i do not have a title yet just my prologue My life is like a ocean; at the ...

wow i thought it was really great . I loved your descriptions i could almost see what was happening in my mind i can't wait to read more.