enzoguy15

After going over my comments I'm beginning to lose all faith in you all. When people comment me and tell me I should do this and that, It makes my ...

THe names cleaver! Hope to read some of your work

Hi, and welcome to YWS, I hope you like to write. ill see ya around

WOW! that was a great poem, The others above me have basically fixed your poem so i wont bother with editing. But WOW!

Ok I spaced it out some more thanks for the advice!

Hello! Firstly, I want to make it clear that I don't know much about poetry. I'll try to do my best, though, and I hope it's helpful. Quote: Why my ...

Sadly, I agree with King. You did break the rules of the site. The basic needs for story posting are 2 reviews=1 post. Story-wise, this piece is an excellent creative ...

Hi socunfused, I need to agree with Vernon on this one. Please use punctuation to make your work more tidy and attractive for the reader and also help you to ...

Hey, JFW. ^_^ *glee* This was such an incredible story. I really love the small details that you used--the "hum" of the receptionist's computer really struck me. I loved how ...

hester Matheson. I quite like the name. And I like the way you describe him. Nothing stupid and cliche about it. It's also interesting looking at him from another's point ...

Quote: SUNSHINE Lena, the options were light and sharp or dark and blurred! Good ol' Sunshine... Quote: LUKE I'm not trying your nuts. Haha! Quote: ALEX (CONT'D) We're have a ...

Welcome to Young Writers Society. I agree with deafwriter_19 and SuicideKing. But enough with the rule-breaking business. I'll give you a review. I'm kind of a harsh reviewer so don't ...

Folk tale: Wolf Island Road. By: Joshua G. Wolf island road. Who would have known? It was a dark silent night all was calm. Not a movement was made. A ...

AGB CHAPTER ONE! By: Josh G. Down through the snowy, winding never-ending tree roads south of Boston lays a small town called Lakeville. It’s a quaint town, usually quiet peaceful and ...

A. G.entle B.reeze By: Josh G. Dedicated to A.G.B. ‘don’t ever give up hope.’ When I first saw her, time stopped. Nothing else mattered when I was with her. Her ...