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1) Too much description? Too little? Actually, I admire your use of description and its overall fluidity. I especially appreciated the head examination and the subsequent throbbing. Very well done. ...

Okay, I read through the first half of this- up until they meet the woman in the tan dress and round spectacles. The mean one, you know. I think the ...

That came out really, really nice for your first try. How'd you go about making it? It seems too intricate to be a vexel.

I listen to a lot of the same music that Inertia and Firestarter described. Here are a few different examples: Andrew Bird The Beatles Cold War Kids The Decemberists Iron ...

The first line is a run-on. You either need to create two separate sentences, or properly combine them. A lone comma isn't going to work. The same problem occurs the ...

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I've never really thought about writing sci-fi, but your ideas are certainly enough to leave me inspired. The first idea sounds particularly intriguing, and I'm curious enough to set off ...

humorous (as defined by Webster) Using a standard five-paragraph essay as your outline, create an introduction that highlights the features of humor. Create your next three paragraphs by using example

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I suppose now I'm wondering how to make him seem dynamic, he can't be all hate. Like someone above said, I have to show him being nice, too. I think ...

Short and to the point. Welcome. Your username wouldn't be derived from the Swedish word "smorgasbord," would it?

Banned for not spelling contest properly.

If Muslims (or anyone for that matter) cannot perform their jobs without religious confliction, then they should choose a different career path. Especially with physicians, religion cannot become an e

It's not asking for much to type regularly. Stop whining. --- As she walked past the foster children…no the playground children, Salina hated the term foster-anything. [s]So,[/s] The playground chil

“At two in the morning?” She took another sip of her coffee. It was already mentioned that she was upset, so I'd include something here to help to emphasize that. ...