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sorry....>.> this: Werewolves also have a higher body temperature, about one hundred none degrees, so don’t; expect us to pop up in any hospital-we heal pretty quickly anywise. was supposed ...

pie-yeah. tha't skinda my problem. it's in first person narrative, and i'm trying to tell it as she would. as my creative writing teacher ut it, i need to show ...

Okay, before I get ahead of myself, we have to get some things straight: 1) Yes, I am a werewolf. I have a pack. Actually, it’s not mine. But I ...

yeah...summy-ish...I'm still in a kinda rough-draft stage. but thanks!! and, yes. werewolves....and vampires....they come soon enough.

I always love a good run with the pack. How the cool night air whips back my fur as we run along, under the pale, milky luminescence of the moon. ...

w00t!! goooo Twilight!! Go Edward!!! its very nice...but....(there's always a but...) the line: I tried to hide behind a curtain of hair so I couldn't see its longer than the ...

wow...you got me hooked from the first sentence. this might be just something that annoys me, but you tend to start your paragraphs with articles. It kind of dulls it. ...

Treachery betrays Lies inside That hide Asleep Forever or more Until Someone Reveals the truth It's blind to all who see Right through Lies betrayal treason Truth is gone when ...

much thanks!! i'll see to it that i'll break it up. i tried it on paper,and it does look better. maybe i was just a afraid of messing it up??

Pretty good, except what the others have said. It's a little dry, not much description. But a good first shot. also... “Do I have a gift,” the boy asked with ...

Music is beauty Above all the rest A loving emotion The best of the best It weaves a new fabric Of sweet harmony Notes embraced tightly Is music to me ...

awesome. i like your imagery. and its very interesting how you used 'she' to describe. not many people put a werewolf in the female gender. i ocmmend you. ^_^ *round ...

wow. that's good. i like how it flows. ...although...the line, "which started in the dark to beat" kind of of confuses me. but jsut a little. i like the line ...

The picture could be too big to be an avatar; maybe you could try resizing it in paint? um...i...fixed it?? turns out i was putting the url in the wrong ...

ari- don't ask....its just a weird, intertwined family tree we invented at school...0_0 and, hopefully i'll get around to doing nanowrimo this year. i tried last year, and failed miserably. ...