enjeru

hey there!!! ------PROLOGUE----- At the outskirts of the mountain range was the largest of them all, largest mountain? be a tad bit clearer here... The sunrise fell onto it in ...

other words, i want to critique your stories (or poems). so, i get more point/posts/ect., and you get more feedback. see the symbiosis?? yeah.....thought so.... :D :smt041

I need help getting my password. I forgot it, and i don't use the email it sent my password to (and i don't know the password to that, either). does ...

10/10 awww, they're kissing!!!! and i like his hair...^_^

1. dunno... 2. once, then its not 25 anymore!! 3. lunch and dinner 4. one--the guy 5. um...a puddle?? 6. A CLOUD!!! (just a guess...)

okey-dokey... I stopped at the foot of the stairs , listening to an impossible conversation [s]upstairs[/s]. comma there, and the second 'upstairs' is just redundant. :) You could use something ...

here's one!!!

ok. i will say this one more time. Don't worry. Most of Jaiver's actions will make sense once i post the next chapter up. it will be form his point ...

pretty good. I liked it. your character seems a bit sheltered, if you ask me. but i'm guessing that's just part of the story. everyone else caught already what I ...

ok, thanks. that was one of the things i was afriad of. some of the holes in the details should be fleshed out a bit in the next chapter, including ...

The first thing I saw when I opened my eyes were the lights. There were dozens of them, softly pulsing in many different colors. I blinked. They remained there. I ...

Blood Moon: 69% Risen From Ashes: 79.6% coolie. ^_^

woo-hoo!! sorry about it being so short. i'm trying to adjust the chapters as i edit, so i'll fix that. >.> but thanks!! ~enjeru

“Gah!” I jump up. “Don’t sneak up on me like that, Bryson!” He grins sheepishly. “Zach told us you were here. James told me to check up on you,” he ...

Long had our dull forefathers slept supine, A barefoot boy! I mark him at his play -- Come, listen, my friend, Stephen Otter, [um...yeah...]