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Yes, I agree, I should probably work more on imagery and sounds. I love Derek Walcott for that reason; his poems are amongst the most vivid I've read. Anyone read ...

I liked the poem. It's very honest; it looks very closely at past misconceptions and details change over a period of time. One line struck me as having slightly mixed ...

This is a poem I wrote for (and about) my girlfriend. It's just about the first poem I've ever written - which is shocking for a student of English I ...

I didn't like it. The smooth-flowing sentences lulled me to sleep, so I have no idea what I read. You need sonorization (creation of noise in silence), you need to ...

Thanks! Wow there is quite a variety on the smiley front. :shock: :D

As other people have said, it's wonderful. I like it how you mix words up (eg. "rosesaltelectricblue" and "sushiblueboy") and the entire poem has these bright, neon, almost vibrant images. ...

I thought I'd say hello to everyone here. My name's Adam, I'm from England and am 19 years old. I love English Literature and reading in general but haven't really ...