endless_secrets

This was a great chapter, I can't wait to read some more. I'm sorry i don't have any mistakes to point out to you, although i think i passed over ...

I was also a bit put off by the title, and i totally get that some writers can't come up with the title right away, but funny thing is for ...

I really like this chapter, the only things i would like you to add are why she is there, why she shows herself and why she accepts his ride. Also ...

Although this was very short I very much enjoyed reading it and only wish it were longer! You are very good with sensatory description, I almost felt like I was ...

WOW! That was a great chapter, very intricate use of description yet again, you have a gift! Keep writing you've got me hooked. I also have a bad feeling, like ...

This was very intriguing and made me want to keep reading, very few easily corrected spelling errors, overall a job well done. I really like how you descibed the change, ...

Very good story, i just read both chapters and you've got me hooked already! Didn't catch many mistakes but the ones i did you could easily correct with a simple ...

I just read all seven chapters and thought they were all amazing! I woul;d point out mistakes and error but it seems someone has already done this for me. :) ...