endless_secrets

Hey Lindsey Thanks so much for the review! I will definately fix up those little errors you found and you are completely right about my lack of sensory description. i'll ...

This piece as well as all the others in my profile as of December 30-10 have been removed because I haven't been on YWS in years and all have either ...

Here are a few if you are into fantasy or romance. Twilight series and the Host, Stephenie Meyer Mortal Instruments series, Cassandra Clare Tithe, Ironside and Valiant by Holly Black ...

I write because I love it, I have been writing since i could spell and when I turned twelve I wrote my fist novella, it was about 120 pages, but ...

Great first chapter, i just wish it was longer. You have great use of characterization, and your characters most definately seem real. Great job with the male perspective, i could ...

Hello I just read all chapters up until this one, and I must say that they are all very origional and I enjoyed them all. I particularily like the names ...

That was very interesting and i think it is fine at the length that it is, prefaces and prologues shouldn't be too long. But anyways, I found little to no ...

I am happy to say YES! and I am well on my way with just below 60 000 words! Almost there guys! Its about a girl with the *sight* very ...

Hey there. i really enjoyed this fist bit, it was very descriptive and full of feeling although i also would have like to see some motive for the suiside, but ...

Wow. That was just wow. I loved that chapter and the one before that and the one before that lol. You really are seriously talented. Just a few quick things, ...

hey there! So just a few comments, i love your plot, have since the beginning! You have to watch out for grammer and spelling mistakes and you have to choose ...

I really enjoyed your preface and part of chapter one, I do like your idea of the Elementals as this is an idea i played around with myself :) unlike ...

I found this first chapter to be very interesting. I am very curious to see what comes of the ring, and a good writer makes you curious. (Yes that was ...

Wow, that was amazing, sorry i haven't criticed in a while, my laptop broke. :( But i just read everything i missed and i must say extremely well done! You ...

Wow, i really like where this is going, but i did spot many mistakes, so i will do my best to correct them. I walked into the study and shut ...