endless_secrets

Well written and intriguing but I simply exited without commenting the first time because she dies at the end. A prologue is supposed to make you want to read the ...

Thanks Winie! You guys are great! I can't belive you like it and feel the emotion even withought having the read book 1! :)

Thank you Kyllorac for yet another helpful crit, I remember you from I posted the beginning of another novel June, which is still in the works by the way. 38 ...

This piece as well as all the others in my profile as of December 30-10 have been removed because I haven't been on YWS in years and all have either ...

Hello! You have something really interesting here, your descriptions are immaculate, not to over the top I think, but almost poetic in a way. I found only one mistake. No ...

Hey there! I think you've got something interesting here, but I agree with the telling and not really showing, also I found myself skipping over some parts because and sections ...

Thanks Dudette, you were a lot of help actually and thanks for the ego boost! I will be posting the edits shortly and hopefully part three soon after. It hard ...

Meadowlark! I didn't see you there! Thanks for your review, i will add more desciption and fix it up according to your suggestions. I was in a rush and when ...

Rubin Thank you for your review, I will try to add alittle more description because unfortunately i am know for bridging, i really just can't wait to get to the ...

Thank you Ofir!! You just made my day, its far from being at its best but i'm glad you liked it! Of course I'll PM you when the next piece ...

Springrain Why didn't I think of that *nervous laugh* Will do!

A novel of fantastical love, irish folklore and the adventures of one stubborn sixteen year old CIPA patient. June The second they pulled into the cobblestone driveway of their out ...

Thank you Sunshire, Kara and Kyla! You are right about her speaking to formally, I just finished writing a novel where one character has this thing about speaking formally all ...

Thank you Meadow and Kyllorak for your reviews, I have edited out most of the long sentences and few other things according to your suggestions and will be posting the ...

JUNE A novel of fantastical love, irish folklore and the adventures of one stubborn sixteen year old CIPA patient. June’s ears faintly registered the sound of the heart monitor’s constant ...