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  • Will Review For Food Re: Reviewer Testimonials

    Xirena is a poetry godess :) I am very, very, very happy with her work. if you have poetry, GO TO HER.

    Jan 6, 2010
  • Writing Tips Re: Over-explain or be obscure???

    Sometimes in fiction, the writer has to tackle something that needs to be explained or clarified, like an unreliable narrator, a piece of history with a character, a new world ...

    Jan 5, 2010
  • Writing Tips Re: Editing Tips Anyone?

    Sounds painful :xd: Thanks for sharing the wisdom, rosey. I guess I have a lot of work ahead of me...

    Jan 3, 2010
  • Research Re: Making my character snap

    I'd say a mixture of both. Have B be an indicating factor that he is on his way to a mental breakdown, and then let him snap. That sounds like ...

    Jan 1, 2010
  • Writing Tips Re: Um... (peeking over shoulder)

    I had this problem long ago, when I first attempted writing. My dad walked in, read what I was reading out loud (I hadn't realized how horrible it sounded until ...

    Jan 1, 2010
  • Writing Tips Re: First person?

    I agree with everyone above. Being in fist person is kind of like taking on a fake identity; you must always try to stay in disguise, per se, and not ...

    Dec 31, 2009
  • Writing Tips Re: The Prologue

    I've never written a prologue, but If I ever feel the need I'll reference this article; it may everything very neat and simplified; I always hear about prologues being a ...

    Dec 31, 2009
  • Writing Tips Re: "It would be great if there was a writing program that..."

    I wish there was a writing program that told you when your writing wasn't nearly as witty as you imagined in your head. You can always read it out loud ...

    Dec 31, 2009
  • Writing Tips Re: Editing Tips Anyone?

    I've been struggling with this myself, and although all of these comments were helpful, I thought I'd add a question of my own. How do you go about editing huge ...

    Dec 31, 2009
  • Writers Corner Re: Dreams? (somebody please give feedback)

    Yeah, I always wake up with the most vibrant dream in my head and announce "I'll write it down!" But dreams are unusually tedious things that just drone on and ...

    Oct 11, 2009
  • Writers Corner Re: Two novel Ideas haunting me, Help!!!

    Hey Pudin I would say write out your high school idea; but don't let your vampire story be tucked away forever. I really enjoyed it.

    Oct 11, 2009
  • Writers Corner Re: Is this a cool idea?

    That is the coolest idea I have heard in a long, long time. Honestly. It would be superfool if you played with cause and effect; starting with one continent and ...

    Oct 11, 2009
  • Writers Corner Re: My New Book Ideas. (WHich do you think?)

    I think you should make the cult a demon-worshipping cult; you could play with names and sins and have supercool anti-communion rituals... Second one is the best, hands down.

    Oct 11, 2009
  • Writers Corner Re: My Latest Attempt At A Novel

    Your premise sounds great. I would say, though, that you should have some important-but-not-as-important characters be straight. Or else it feels, I don't know, too gimicky. It's obvious you already ...

    Oct 11, 2009
  • Writers Corner Re: Typing an important factor?

    This summer, I decided that I wanted to increase my typing speed tenfold. So I got a roll of that super-adhesive opaque tape and cut out little squares, placing them ...

    Oct 11, 2009


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