empressoftheuniverse

Hello Todd, First off, let me say that this is a pretty solid story. I only review things that I like in the first place, and this is the first ...

First of all, I love the title. Rarely ever does a title absolutely strike me as something I must read, but this did. Just for the hell of it, I ...

What I loved most about this poem was that at the end I got the impression that both characters were in convalescence, or at least that the nurse gains as ...

First of all, not to disrespect past reviewers but in the name of god and/or Ryan Renolds, do not turn this into rhyming poetry. The only thing I have to ...

Their limbs are knotted, coiled, and sleek. Their voices are : tuba, bassoon, sousaphone. They seethe with a dangerous sort of light, dark and deep; red and blue hues. Eyes ...

Let me first say that this is a beautiful poem. And I think your point here was to creative something whimsical, which you very much succeeded in doing. However, I ...

Hey tanja! It's me. I just wanted to say, good job for finally getting something up. And I enjoyed reading it, though I hate carnivals and I cant see your ...

I remember this story. How could I forget? My one friend who's fond of action and dialogue and not the passages of purple-prosed narration. I definitely felt the pace slow ...

Hello, Pudin. Long time since I've read anything of yours, so sorry. Well, this is a completely different piece than your other novel-- I like it more, so far. I ...

that was really beautiful, fixed. Carried to the hilltop, the tulip growing weak, held in coarse hands, twirled in cold night. random nitpick, but I'd rather the tulip part be ...

Hello, I really enjoyed your poem. i thought it was silly and whimsical, and though the rhyming scheme is utterly forced I think that's all right, here. I can actually ...

I think cheesy found an accidental rhyme, because I certainly didn't see it. You struck me, screaming goodbyes. I actually really liked this line; and as always, I'm out of ...

If I counted all your lies, I would be surprised if you told even some truths. Soothsayer. You ? I don't like the = sign I just want to know ...

I kind of like this poem. I'm a little lukewarm about it. It reminded me of the piece by Shell Silverstein called a boy named Sue-- which to me had ...

I don't agree with everyone else in that I thought you had a pretty good delivery of your piece, but I didn't like the idea. Sorry if that was really ...