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  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Prydwen Hall a novel

    Wow. I like it a lot; I knew I was going to like Malcolm. Small, but spunky. I hope Peter doesn't play any excessively mean tricks on him. Is this ...

    Aug 29, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Prydwen Hall A novel I'm working on

    Beautiful! I really like it; although I might as well tell you that I like Devon and new-kid crybaby more than I like Peter. I'll use a harry potter metaphor ...

    Aug 29, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Seeking Attention Part 2

    That was really fantastic. And I was right about the salem witch trials-- good job tying in the events of her death and her flawed personality. It sounded like very ...

    Aug 29, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Seeking Attention Part 1

    Wow. That was really creative. I assume this is happening somewhere in new england, or at least on the east coast? With a girl who was killed during the salem ...

    Aug 29, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Miracles

    I like it. Although it took me a while to compute-- choice between eternal life or smelly old earth life equals car crash and Melanie gets out unscathed. But I'm ...

    Aug 29, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Child's Play Part One

    “Everyone, this is Milanka. She’s new to this kind of school, so let’s make her feel as much at home as we possibly can, alright?” Chuck bounced on his toes ...

    Aug 29, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Ruthless.

    I love it! Five golden stars and a kiss from a mermaid!There was one spelling error-- let me see. "everything that ethics sad was wrong" obviously, it should be said. ...

    Aug 29, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Vampyres, Prt 2.

    YAY! I'm all caught up with your story (until you write part 4) and I love it! Although I have to say I was a little disappointed with the content. ...

    Aug 29, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Vampyres, Prt 1.

    All the questions I had when I read part three were answered here. And even though I know what happens to Belle I can't wait to read part two; so ...

    Aug 29, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Vampyres, prt 3.

    Ummmm... I didn't read parts one and two (so sorry!) but I'll be sure to next thing. My first reaction was "Snap fo shizzle, not another vampire romance!" and my ...

    Aug 29, 2009


You have to be a bit of a liar to tell a story the right way.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind