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Hello there! I wasn't going to post anything at first because the number of comments is a little intimidating, but I thought what the hillbillyonahaystack. I might at well. This ...

It's pretty good so far; however I should tell you that, sometimes, very, very short posts are just as daunting as very, very, very, long ones. There's not much to ...

Hello; I am Meagan the Empress and I am looking for something, anything, to get my hands on and critique. No charge; I just do it for the sake of ...

You did a really great job! I especially like the hair; a little yu-gi-oh- esque but much, much cooler. I like his face the most; it looks very determined. And ...

Wow; that was great; it was actually pretty gritty! And dark! I knew you had it in you! This is actually a lot more interesting, so far, than the back ...

Have him face some doubts; throw in some emotional turmoil. Gary Stus are what they are not because they're more or less perfect in every way (superman, anyone? Loved by ...

It's called a child's play part one; I would also appreciate it if you read part two but that's entirely up to you. The genre is other fiction; darker other ...

When life hands you lemons, throw them at glass houses. When life hands you lemons, ask life if he couldn't find something more productive to do. Then eat the lemon ...

Figuratively; of course. I'm new here and I've already posted two parts of one story (keeping in mind the golden ratio rule) and reviewed several works. But there's so much ...

It's me again. I know, stalker. I really like this poem; especially the last three lines. Your two longer lines, however, seem a little awkward. I'm talking about, of course ...

That was really good. And yes, most people do use a razor although sometimes a pen, a mechanical pencil, a brush with metal bristles or your own nails work as ...

I feel a self obligation to finish books. Because usually I've paid for them and even if I haven't; I do it out of respect of the author. You can't ...

That was really good! I read all of your other stuff and I thought you might be a Harry Potter fan. I really like your works, all of them, but ...

Child’s Play: Part Two Rated a loose R for “thematic” elements (I’ll star the passage so you can skip it if you feel the need) Please read part one; you ...

That was really good! I liked the language and the whimsical tone of the story. Picking the old man as the narrator was an interesting thing to do. Your writing ...