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To andrea, Mimi reminds you of me?? And this story reminds you of American psycho? So... *scratches head* I remind you of Baetam? That's not the greatest compliment. And thank ...

Thank you, Roon! And after bullying all my friends into reading this... it's not just you. No one understood that sentence. Taking the fifth means-- not telling anyone your story. ...

I saw this story posted as romantic fiction and thought "Oh goody! Something easy and uplifting!" Oh well. That was really good. I like the fact that you're a female ...

I did read your preview; It was pretty intriguing. This was even more so; though I don't quite understand where the story's going from here. A strange accident renders him ...

I really like this idea-- imaginary friends that personify themselves to help him work through his problems. I know names aren't usually critiqued but.. a scientist named Jake? Not even ...

I have now pinned down what it is about this character that forces her to seem sometimes completely geniune; sometimes horribly fabricated. She's mannish. Also known as an Amazon. Now; ...

Hello; this has pretty much the same symptoms as the last post; except that your character doesn't sound as much like a teenage girl here; though she does have some ...

I'm just going to spew random facts about my self. My real name is Meagan I'm fourteen but If i could be any age; it'd be 80 I've never had ...

Okay, let me say first that I really, really liked it. One typo “I’m here, mow let’s go” I said, bored. mow to now. But you know that. Some random ...

Thank you, pudin. I think you will enjoy part two a little more; and I am writing part three write now. They seem to get progressively worse; in terms of ...

Thank you Stella! After you edited the first part I did add some sections to make the story clearer; one of which being an explanation that this school was "a ...

Hello Roon, I was wondering if you could read over the first two parts of my story A Child's Play Part One A Child's Play Part Two They are pretty ...

GREAT! Can you do both parts of my story? It's other fiction (dark other fiction, leaning kinda towards horror) and I would love some more reviews! Here's part one: and ...

Hello everyone, I've got the 2:1 ratio down pat; I need no reminding :) I'm sure you all get tired of saying it. I've critiqued quite a few things already, ...

I think you've had two very nitpickish reviews; especially considering that I was glued to the screen. Heck, I even teared up. Or sobbed once. Or let tears fall freely ...