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His hands. Or are they mine? Tear at my virtue, and fondle every vice. Until what remains is a lesser version of himself. His lips. Taste like redemption— olive sherbet ...

I think you'd like this song, if you haven't listened to it already: Just in case you're afraid to click on it, it's a collage of Van Gogh pictures played ...

I hate it when the first thing people say about short poetry is that they wish you would "expand it." So of course I'm going to say just that. Only ...

Hey I've been following this novel and even though I really enjoy it so far I've been a little wary to comment. This is because, from what I understand you ...

Hey I just wanted to say something really quick about this poem taken for granite or taken for granted? At first I thought maybe it was a play on words, ...

I love the new take on this. A lot writers like to write about writing and writer's block and such (a gratuitous form of writing, to be sure) but this ...

My soul is devastation A burden so heavy it cracks concrete With earth-shattering simplicity I fail to astound, even to register The world walks on, unimpressed I see you blaze ...

I was really hoping to have something constructive or at least coherent to say because I'm one of those people that hates to gush BUT all I have is this ...

I really like how Eyes bright red. rhymes with So easily led. and then nothing else rhymes. I sort of sets up an expectation and then tears it down. I ...

I thought this was really beautiful. I think what I like most about it is how... adult it sounded. Sometimes when teenagers write poetry, no matter the language they use ...

Hello, I just wanted to say that I read your other poem and from what I've read I really like your writing style. You convey ideas and images simply and ...

Okay this is my third attempt at writing a review so forgive me if this is super brief but my computer is maddening. But what I'm trying to say is ...

I don't know if it is fitting to review a review, but that was really beautiful. It doesn't matter that I disagree with it almost 100%, did not cry at ...

I did sign your guestbook and your blog looks really interesting. Wondering if you could critique my Harry Potter fanfic Occlumency Lessons I was hoping for someone to critique character ...

First off, let me say that I don't normally write fanfiction so this is totally alien to me. I think I did it correctly, complete with the little asterisks when ...