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Could you please read Child's Play, part three? Its dark fiction; posted in other fiction. It's not up just yet, but it will be by tomorrow, once I rough edit ...

That is why you don't provoke people with reasonable questions... Poor Barry; it must suck to not be able to suppress your feelings; to feel powerless to an emotion; to ...

Okay, that was a really good story. I assume this was the one you wanted me to review? Novel in action/ adventure? Great job. You have a lot of info ...

Thank you dakota! I am pretty new to this site but I have done a fair amount of reviews. I will definitely read your novel when it comes out and ...

I didn't read chapter one, so sorry, but I thoroughly enjoyed this one! Reading Harry Potter fanfic makes me happy, for some reason. Though I understand what the point of ...

Wow. That was mucho creative! Especially the creation of new characters. I don't even like twilight and I loved your story. Especially the freaky birthing-hospital. I wouldn't mind a little ...

I remember you. Random guestbook-signing person. Ok; I really liked it! It had a lot of dialogue, which was kind of needed in this situation. I liked the Different Denny's; ...

Why does this have only two stars?? You need to get more people to review your writing. I like this a LOT more than your other story. So... six platinum ...

So much that he tells me secrets he doesn’t share with anyone else. He tells me secrets he would never share with anyone else. Other than that, good job! I ...

HAHA did not read the bold until the end... wow. So everything I would have said is deleted; and I say... GREAT JOB. I really, really, really hope you win. ...

This was really good! It felt a little sad and nostalgic. I like the POV here-- how you jumped into the person's head right before the old woman spoke to ...

Hey! I answered this before but my Internet shut down so... What I look for in a storyline? Character development; an interesting plot, a mixture of sadness and sweet. My ...

There's no such thing as too many questions! Let's see favorite artist/band: Emily Autumn, then MSI, Kanye West's religious raps, the punk songs from 3OH!3, Flyleaf, Paramore Favorite color: Rainbow. ...

SNAP! I wrote like the world's longest review and then my Internet shut down. But I'll summarize it for you 1) I like your story-- very polished 2) It's a ...

Hello; I suppose I should remind you of the two to one ratio... but I won't. I liked you letter. One one hand, I can see how the interesting fonts ...