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Re: An extract from my novel: Red Vendetta
It was beautiful! The best thing I've read of yours! I don't know where this fits in with the rest of your story; if this is part her her past ...
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Re: Advent Child; Ep 2
OH NO!! Was my reaction. I cannot wait to read the sequel. Is it the ending? Are you making a trilogy? Because I'm going to have to read the entire ...
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Re: My first posted story!
This is a little random, but: did you mean published as in by a company, or on this website published? Welcome, by the way. And let me say what I ...
Sep 7, 2009 -
Re: Advent Child [Series]; Book One_ Lower Town
YESS Part three of book one. Now all that's left are books two and three... hoo boy. But I can't freakin' wait for the tournament! There are two ways to ...
Sep 7, 2009 -
Re: Loss, part I
Beautiful. And let me say welcome! Assuming you are new and not a returning member. I loved your story. In my opinion you could use your talent writing stories that ...
Sep 7, 2009 -
Re: Advent Child [Series]; Book One_ Lower Town
Holy shizmole, that program worked! I can read it now!! Will edit this and add a review soon, i hope. Being the technotard I am, I am uploading part three ...
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Re: Shining Light In Dark places
Yeah, the two reviews to one post is MUY IMPORTANTE to the proper function of this site. That way, everyone's work gets reviewed; and besides which, most people learn better ...
Sep 6, 2009 -
Re: Jack of All Trades
Hello again! Sorry about the broken link. Part three (aka part two point five) is now up! I'm going to save myself some embarassment and not post the link here. ...
Sep 6, 2009 -
Re: When Souls Collide (Part 1 Chap. 1)
Night owl took all the nitpicks for me; thank you night owl! So I'll work on the other stuff. Your placement of the dream was a little weird; it might ...
Sep 6, 2009 -
Re: Advent Child [Series]; Book One_ Lower Town
Part two of book one posted before part one of book one! The book seems to warm up right about here; or, more precisely, towards the end of here. Reading ...
Sep 6, 2009 -
Re: Wood Shards & Infidelity To Self
The problem with nonfiction poetry that really speaks to people (especially people like me) is that no one wants to review it for fear of sounding scornful of your misery... ...
Sep 6, 2009 -
Re: Call Me Falline
Hello... Avery. I have read some of your work and would love to get to know you a little better; especially since you said you've been through things that no ...
Sep 6, 2009 -
Re: Undomestic Goddess
The Undomestic Goddess By Sophie Kinsella Chic Lit. Okay; the first time I read this book was while babysitting my cousins in Texas. It was hot, sticky, and the hours ...
Sep 6, 2009 -
Re: Childs play part two point five
Yes, sexting does mean sex texting. I'm trying to keep you waiting. Answering one question while revealing another. I don't anyone to get bored with my story! You actually caught ...
Sep 6, 2009 -
Re: Childs play part two point five
Child’s Play Part Two Point Five (another transition piece) *It has come to my attention that Child’s Play is a really unoriginal title. Does someone want to help me by ...
Sep 6, 2009
