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Forever with you? I don't like the title very much; could use a little tough love. But I'm no good at titles, either. Pretty much everything that Evi said was ...

You really should use writing prompt for practicing with word choice and playing around with your voice; for an actual story that you want to begin and end, and be ...

Okay, If you read book one of advent child (located in the advanced critiques section of this site) Xunn, the writer, does a magnificent job of switching from a fight ...

You're cool.

I'm going to call you out. Everyone cares what other people think of them; on some subtle level. It may be easier to blow people off on the internet because ...

I don't need anything; I just wanted to say that Pudin does some great reviews, and you should absoloutely go to her with whatever story you want critiqued.

What I meant by fleshed out is.... I need more words. Sometimes a short blurb of a story can be just as daunting as a very, very long one (as ...

xunnanimus... It is interesting; reading a 250 page book on the computer. I don't think I will ever do it again. Ever. For anyone. At least, not in practically one ...

I know I don't have to review but I get a sick thrill out of reading these things. I thought It was hilarious; I hope you win.

God that was amazing. I understand that it is a synopsis/ character sketch; but I would have liked to see a scene with these two playing out a typical day. ...

That was beautiful. I nearly cried. I was really, really close to bawling but... I got distracted and then the moment was over. Sorry. That was truly magnificant; and really, ...

I like it. Your verbal (and physical) sparring was pretty neat... it takes a special kind of writer to master dialogue like that. The beginning was powerful; and the action ...

Hey thunder dude; I was wondering if you could glance at my story A child's play part two point five?? And you'll probably need to read parts one and two ...

Yet another post! I'm gonna meld two into one this time; so I don't clog your thread. And the last two will be up shortly.

This was also really good! I would advise, though, waiting a little longer to put out part two; sometimes you have to let your stories simmer; get a ton of ...