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This was a lot better, actually. Edwin seems like a bit of a creeper... but I have guyphobia. Maybe he'll grow on me with time. I think everything was pretty ...

I'm just going to focus on chapter five; and one remark: your method of posting is a little confuddled. This is what you can do: Post part seven, for example. ...

Thank you for the ideas... I will go pick those up the next time I have some money to spare. I don't believe in library books; If I enjoy the ...

Hello!~ I thought I'd check out your other work; and I found this!YAy. Okay, so you repeat that Charlie is a model a lot, a lot, a lot of times. ...

Hello again! This section of the story seemed to have a lot more emotion. Bueno. Everyone else got the nitpicks which makes my job way super easy. Kind of. But ...

The italicized thoughts didn't bother me in the least; but I use them a lot in my own writing; so that's kind of understandable. I like this piece, I don't ...

You have some spelling/ grammar errors. And I stink at grammar and spelling, so I'm going to let a better person find those and I'll focus on other stuff. Just ...

I'm not usually one to get on people's case about the ratio; but make sure you know its there. For every piece of story you post; you must do two ...

Nitpicks work. They suck but they need to be done Fuck my life, was all that was running though Elsa’s mind on the stormy Sunday afternoon that was her birthday. ...

I like American Psycho, Dexter, things of that nature. It doesn't have to include gore or serial killers.. but it has to be dark. Humor is appreciated but not needed. ...

No, its not a book. But it's a wonderful old woman whos read about a thousand romance novels. And they're all reviewed and rated up on her site. If it ...

I am not the hugest fan of Stephen King... maybe something is horribly awry with my sense of horror, but I haven't been frightened with any of his books yet. ...

I love this book. I'm reading it right now and I want to go out and buy American Psycho posters and hang them on my wall and wear American psycho ...

I had no trouble with this book, so maybe I shouldn't say anything; did you mean you were having trouble with the family members and whatnot? Or the language? The ...

Child's Play Part 2.5 Dark fiction link: Specific things: a better title, dialogue (what you liked, what you didn't) whether or not it made sense Part one And two Thank ...