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Re: Boxing
Okay I also pasted this into word and will upload a full (really full) review soon. Sorry I'm stuffed with homework I may put this off to the weekend. I ...
Sep 30, 2009 -
Re: The life of a border collie (Chapter one)
Your poll was a little ambiguous; of course, if you love to write, write! Write a book about your adorable border collies, a short story about intergalactic serial killers, what ...
Sep 30, 2009 -
Re: discussion on Twilight (and Eragon)
I retract my statement about House and replace it with "That guy from the Dos Equis Commercial," I was trying to think of someone who would turn me into a ...
Sep 30, 2009 -
Re: What influenced you to write what you are writing right now?
A spider's web a podcast called seanachi An online story called Her side Ray Bradbury
Sep 30, 2009 -
Re: What are you reading at the moment?
I'm reading The Martian Chronicles Death is a lonely business Twice 22 all at once, all by ray bradbury
Sep 30, 2009 -
Re: Just wanted to know what you think.
I'm pretty sure everyone else picked up the nitpicks, so I'll just say what I thought as I was reading. One teeny, tiny piece of foreshadowing would be nice. I ...
Sep 30, 2009 -
Re: discussion on Twilight (and Eragon)
I don't find anything sick with the idea of someone wanting a fictional character out of a book. I wouldn't allow my boyfriend to be anything but Rhett Butler; perfectly ...
Sep 29, 2009 -
Re: Zombies and Teapot girls.
This was quaint but i really, really liked it. One thing "Why its the unobtainable goals we seek to over come that make us truly alive." Good quote and definetely ...
Sep 29, 2009 -
Re: abandonment
Okay, I'm going to edit this comment with my review very, very soon. But its late and I have a dentist appointment tomorrow. I copied your document, pasted it in ...
Sep 29, 2009 -
Re: Beginning to my story
I call myself Yuki and for me, the streets had always been home to me ever since I saw my house in ruins with my parent’s bodies lying by my ...
Sep 29, 2009 -
Re: Witchcraft Love (Rated R, seriously)
WOAH. how come pudin gets all of these comments and I have to beg people to come look at my stories?? I take criticism well; have I angered you all ...
Sep 29, 2009 -
Re: Scarecrow
Thank you, thank you, thank you for the comments! You're too nice. and I changed edifice to domicile:law somebody's true, fixed, and legally recognized place of residence. I chose jived ...
Sep 28, 2009 -
Re: Scarecrow
It was the kind of day where sadness slid down your shoulder blades; melancholy formed droplets at the top of your brow. Children cried, adults laughed, but the two sounds ...
Sep 28, 2009 -
Re: Witchcraft Love (Rated R, seriously)
Tha was amazing. Honestly, I don't know what else to say. I felt sick to my stomach; in a good way. Huzzah.
Sep 28, 2009 -
Re: A deadly secret
This was really good. I'm kind of sad to say I liked it more than I did Red Vendetta... but I hope you continue this story. Reading made my throat ...
Sep 23, 2009
