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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Boxing

    Okay I also pasted this into word and will upload a full (really full) review soon. Sorry I'm stuffed with homework I may put this off to the weekend. I ...

    Sep 30, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: The life of a border collie (Chapter one)

    Your poll was a little ambiguous; of course, if you love to write, write! Write a book about your adorable border collies, a short story about intergalactic serial killers, what ...

    Sep 30, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: discussion on Twilight (and Eragon)

    I retract my statement about House and replace it with "That guy from the Dos Equis Commercial," I was trying to think of someone who would turn me into a ...

    Sep 30, 2009
  • Fiction Discussion Re: What influenced you to write what you are writing right now?

    A spider's web a podcast called seanachi An online story called Her side Ray Bradbury

    Sep 30, 2009
  • Fiction Discussion Re: What are you reading at the moment?

    I'm reading The Martian Chronicles Death is a lonely business Twice 22 all at once, all by ray bradbury

    Sep 30, 2009
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Just wanted to know what you think.

    I'm pretty sure everyone else picked up the nitpicks, so I'll just say what I thought as I was reading. One teeny, tiny piece of foreshadowing would be nice. I ...

    Sep 30, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: discussion on Twilight (and Eragon)

    I don't find anything sick with the idea of someone wanting a fictional character out of a book. I wouldn't allow my boyfriend to be anything but Rhett Butler; perfectly ...

    Sep 29, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Zombies and Teapot girls.

    This was quaint but i really, really liked it. One thing "Why its the unobtainable goals we seek to over come that make us truly alive." Good quote and definetely ...

    Sep 29, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: abandonment

    Okay, I'm going to edit this comment with my review very, very soon. But its late and I have a dentist appointment tomorrow. I copied your document, pasted it in ...

    Sep 29, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Beginning to my story

    I call myself Yuki and for me, the streets had always been home to me ever since I saw my house in ruins with my parent’s bodies lying by my ...

    Sep 29, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Witchcraft Love (Rated R, seriously)

    WOAH. how come pudin gets all of these comments and I have to beg people to come look at my stories?? I take criticism well; have I angered you all ...

    Sep 29, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Scarecrow

    Thank you, thank you, thank you for the comments! You're too nice. and I changed edifice to domicile:law somebody's true, fixed, and legally recognized place of residence. I chose jived ...

    Sep 28, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Scarecrow

    It was the kind of day where sadness slid down your shoulder blades; melancholy formed droplets at the top of your brow. Children cried, adults laughed, but the two sounds ...

    Sep 28, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Witchcraft Love (Rated R, seriously)

    Tha was amazing. Honestly, I don't know what else to say. I felt sick to my stomach; in a good way. Huzzah.

    Sep 28, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: A deadly secret

    This was really good. I'm kind of sad to say I liked it more than I did Red Vendetta... but I hope you continue this story. Reading made my throat ...

    Sep 23, 2009


People say I love you all the time - when they say, ‘take an umbrella, it’s raining,’ or ‘hurry back,’ or even ‘watch out, you’ll break your neck.’ There are hundreds of ways of wording it - you just have to listen for it, my dear.
— John Patrick, The Curious Savage