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I would love it if you read my short story Scarecrow It's in other fiction. I love you avatar, by the way. Thanks a ton.

Hello! I have a short story for you to critique called Scarecrow It's in other fiction; about fifteen hundred to two thousand words. How do people do that cool thing ...

Although your prequel twilight idea is really good, I'd say leave twilight alone and pursue your own story. Your ideas are too great to be mixed with the copyrighted characters ...

Sorry accidentally pressed submit too early... anyways.. " You know, the blue patterned ones that I worked on for 3 months!! I have a truck waiting outside for the orders!", ...

Hey! This was pretty good, just a few things you could work on. I WOULD SAY NIX THE ALL CAPS. They're a little distracting and if you say "You!" or ...

You are freaking hilarious. I want to read your collection of essays; i'd pobably spoil myself from the hilarity. Except you don't have a collection of essays. You just have ...

This was amazing, pacu. I really enjoyed it. No grammar mistakes that I noticed; the beginning was really confusing but it made sense at the end, and since the confusion ...

Hello; I read part one but didn't comment on it just yet. Part two is good, though at first I was a little lost. We went to the sight of ...

Characters. Its the people who make a plot, right? Barring out storms and other acts of nature (which, if you have gods in your story, are controlled by characters) a ...

I uploaded a document with the changes; but some further comments here: absolutely finish this story. I'm a little perplexed at why you would even ask that question: everything is ...

OH MY SWEET BURNING RAZZMATAZZ. No swearing outside of literature ;) that was amazing. I thought I was going to hate it when you announced that she had "real beauty, ...

Told you I'd find you.

Gee, I hated the book Phantom of the Opera. I think Andrew Lloyd Webber was a genius for cultivating such a great musical out of that..... thing. It wasn't bad ...

“Meh. Feck it.” I hate to start a critique with me being peeved about one of my pet peeves, but people don't say meh. never, ever, ever. Just like they ...

That was a really beautiful story. I felt that there was a little too much description. Just a little. I feel like a dirty hypocrite for even mentioning it; since ...